Blob said:
With all due respect, I personally do not see what you are pointing out as a mistake. The anatomy seems to add up fine for me. Also is the personal opinion of poor anatomy really a reason to not approve of a post?
I might be looking too deep into this, but here's what the shoulder kinda would look like without the straps and hair, and my attempt at showing how it kinda should look like: https://youtu.be/cI-End5jQwM (I'm not an expert but just my own thought to this).
So the problem is that the neckline is dipping down with a downwards angle and in order it properly to connect to this shoulder here it has to an unnatural curve.